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Here are the comments and judging by Gary Callaway.
First: #8 Second: #3 Third: #5
Comments on images: 1.Spill of light lightens up shadow. Stray shadow to the left of dart body.
2. Stray shadow in blinds distracts from silhouette. Great Idea. Crop to allow Window to fill frame and rotate to straighten up lines
3. Really focused on shadows. Plate in grass distracts.
4. Stray light distracts from shadow. Clip of black in lower left hand corner.
5. Stray shadow across top.
6. stray subject matter in lower left hand corner. Cropped out makes a better more dramatic photograph.
7. Streaks of light distracts from photo. Stray shadow lower right hand corner
8. Technically sound. Dark area in the upper left corner(Light falling off) makes shadow less sharp
9. Good photo. Would like to have seen the photo without the glass and bottle in frame just the shadows of them. The bottle and glass take the focus away from the shadow.
10. Cool idea. One thinks that both #2 and #10 submitted by same person. I like them both. Would like to see window fill the frame and rotated to straighten lines up. The dark spot just to the upper left from skeleton distracts.
I enjoyed doing this and hope that you will not hesitate to include me in your future contests. Thanks.
Gary Callaway Crash Action Photography www.crashactionphoto.com (972)974-4308
Here are the comments and judging by Gary Callaway.
ReplyDeleteFirst: #8
Second: #3
Third: #5
Comments on images:
1.Spill of light lightens up shadow. Stray shadow to the left of dart body.
2. Stray shadow in blinds distracts from silhouette. Great Idea. Crop to allow Window to
fill frame and rotate to straighten up lines
3. Really focused on shadows. Plate in grass distracts.
4. Stray light distracts from shadow. Clip of black in lower left hand corner.
5. Stray shadow across top.
6. stray subject matter in lower left hand corner. Cropped out makes a better more dramatic
photograph.
7. Streaks of light distracts from photo. Stray shadow lower right hand corner
8. Technically sound. Dark area in the upper left corner(Light falling off) makes shadow less sharp
9. Good photo. Would like to have seen the photo without the glass and bottle in frame
just the shadows of them. The bottle and glass take the focus away from the shadow.
10. Cool idea. One thinks that both #2 and #10 submitted by same person. I like them
both. Would like to see window fill the frame and rotated to straighten lines up. The dark
spot just to the upper left from skeleton distracts.
I enjoyed doing this and hope that you will not hesitate to include me in your future contests. Thanks.
Gary Callaway
Crash Action Photography
www.crashactionphoto.com
(972)974-4308